The cool night breeze gently moved the hair around her shoulders, reminding her to enjoy the moment. Coming here, to this beautiful place, had been the right move for her. Slowing down the pace of her life and enjoying the space she was in rejuvenated her. She breathed in slowly, taking in the sound of falling water, the clatter of a nearby restaurant, the gentle murmur of conversation. She continued moving forward and, as she did so, new ideas began to seep into her mind. Yes, the break had been good. Now she was ready to get back to work!
© Colline Kook-Chun, 2020
(This post was inspired by Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle. The challenge asks for bloggers to write a story in 100 words or less in response to the photo prompt.)
I liked the breeze and the sounds
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I would love to experience breezes right now – it is so hot out today!
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I can’t say I’ve ever felt like that, I’d much rather stay on vacation – but I bet there are a few people who have had enough of lockdown around the world who are eager to get out of the house and back to work 🙂
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I know I am eager to get back to my normal work life – working from home in my profession has not been too easy. 🙂
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Liked the way you gradually built the atmosphere, Colline.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thank you so much Susan.
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So few words but great imagery and message!
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Thank you so much John. I appreciate the compliment.
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Very relaxing story, Colline. Looking forward when this scenario becomes the norm again.
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I am hoping that it will.
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There’s a peaceful feel to this tale. I like it.
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Thank you. This is the feel I got when I looked at the photo prompt.
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Very well done. So0metimes it is rejuvenating and helps get the creative juices flowing, sometimes it just wants to stretch forever…
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I have found that sometimes stepping away from a project when it stagnates gets the creative juices flowing again.
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Your description of the place, and the woman’s response to it built a very pleasant atmosphere.
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Thank you. I wanted to create a calm atmosphere.
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Dear Colline,
Everyone needs a break from time to time for mental health. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you so much Rochelle.
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I enjoyed the peaceful feel of this tale and the rejuvenation she experienced. Nicely done!
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Thank you so much Brenda.
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Here’s to taking breaks! Amen! 🙂
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They are always needed to recharge our batteries 🙂
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Yep. Totally! 🙂
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Gentle, restful piece.
I feel quite relaxed now.
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I am glad on it 😀
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Wonderfully atmospheric, I felt I was standing nearby! No doubt she’ll return to work refreshed.
Here’s mine!
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She definitely will after the relaxing break!
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This is such great description. It is so peaceful that just reading it is rejuvenating. Nice story.
-David
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Thank you so much for the compliment David.
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