A New Start


The setting to her new home was perfect! The rooms above the garage led to a view of the crashing ocean and the start of a different life. She would not miss the grey skies and gloomy house she grew up in. She would certainly not miss her austere father who insisted on curbing her movements! Here she would follow her inclination to dress as people her age do, to paint the entire day if she wished, and to make friends with whomever she pleased. Not only was her new home promising but also her life far from Gleneagles.

© Colline Kook-Chun, 2019

(This post was inspired by Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle. The challenge asks for bloggers to write a story in 100 words or less in response to the photo prompt.)

46 thoughts on “A New Start

    1. To be honest I was not thinking of golf when this name popped into my mind. Instead I was thinking of a majestic sounding name for a grand home 😀


  1. I was pleasantly surprised to see we had almost identical titles! Great minds think alike 🙂 I can totally relate to this story, in fact, I may have written this exact fantasy in my journal of an alternative life once as I dreamed of escaping my narcissistic father and controlling home. Lovely story.


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