Hidden among the modern edifices of the sprawling city, the building suggested religious observance, a strict adherence to rules, and practices steeped in history. Instead it housed a rising Phoenix, the spirit of those that revolted against the oppression of the Romans. Centuries later, the small group planned to fight against the oppression of the current rulers.
“This time we need to get leaders in government and business on our side. Let’s be smart so that we can prevail. Think French Revolution!”
The embers stirred as one of the most powerful men of the country walked into the age-old synagogue.
© Colline Kook-Chun, 2019
(This post was inspired by Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle. The challenge asks for bloggers to write a story in 100 words or less in response to the photo prompt.)
If you have the leaders on your side, maybe it’s a coup, not a revolt?
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They are hoping to have a leader on their side – time will tell. As for a coup – maybe not, as the people wanting to rebel against the government are not in the military.
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Dear Colline,
Revolution can begin in the most unexpected places. Nicely done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you so much Rochelle. Sometimes even a small meeting can sometimes lead to bigger things.
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I suspect much is about to change.
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One would hope so. I wish them luck.
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I’m all in for rebellions against oppressors! Great post.
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Thank you. We need rebellions, don’t we, in order to change the status quo.
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This is excellent, Colline. A great beginning for perhaps an exciting political/relgious thriller 🙂
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Thank you. And so often religion and politics are intertwined.
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Yes, and rarely does that work out well.
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I sense much excitement brewing under the surface as the wheels are about to be set in motion! Well done and love the political rising theme.
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Thank you. This morning when I wrote the piece I was in the mood for a little rebellion 😄
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You are welcome. Nothing wrong with that 🙂
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There are stirrings…rebellion is nigh!
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It always takes a few to express the thoughts and desires of many 🙂
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I hope it doesn’t end in bloodshed – there’s been more than enough of that.
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Unfortunately words do not always bring about change.
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I can imagine the small group’s excitement when the leader walked through the door. Their cause had a much better chance. Nicely penned!
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Thank you so much Brenda. And thank you for reading.
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What a line! “Think French Revolution!”
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Thank you 🙂
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With such a powerful ally they have a chance to go far. I like the rebellious history of the building from roman times to today, that builds a nice bridge.
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Thank you so much. I tried to show how history is important in that we can learn from the mistakes we made.
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Places of worship are often the starting point of a rebellion. Nice story.
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Thank you. It may be because these are the places where the community meets.
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