Friday Fictioneers: Hopeless

PHOTO PROMPT © The Reclining Gentleman
PHOTO PROMPT © The Reclining Gentleman

The gloomy surroundings were free of hope and laughter. Mothers hurried their children home and old folk scurried along as fast as they could. The area had long been forgotten by those who had the power to change things. Parks were neglected and maintenance crews were slow to do repairs. Nature, however, has a way of providing beauty. Signs of Spring pushed through the gritty soil, suggesting hope and renewal. The colour and optimism of the flower did not last. The gang members gathered near the natural beauty and trampled the plants heartlessly. Their dominance remained unchallenged.

friday-fictioneers-badge© Colline Kook-Chun, 2016

(This post was inspired by Friday Fictioneers hosted by Rochelle. The challenge asks for bloggers to write a story in 100 words or less in response to the photo prompt.)

4 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers: Hopeless

  1. Dear Colline,

    Have you ever read A Tree Grows in Brooklyn? This story reminded me a little of it in that the tree in the book is growing through the cracks in the sidewalk in a slum. Francie sees is as a symbol of hope and even after they cut it down it still grows. Your piece had that feel to it.




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